EPIC STARE
You know what I'm looking at right now? A double-up Monday. That's right peoples of the world and beyond. I did DOUBLE the Nano par word count today by writing 3554 words today. I basically wrote an entire chapter in one day!!!
I kinda made this deal with myself that I wouldn't buy my Nanowrimo winner's shirt until I was completely sure I could make it to to 50,000 words. And the only way I can know that is to reach my goal before November 30. I really, really want my t-shirt. Oh and to be a winner, of course :D
So my word count for today is: 42,122 words!!
So my word count for today is: 42,122 words!!
I'll keep this post relatively brief because I TOTALLY want to go waste my time on something else like watching Youtube videos or playing a video game (and not the iPad).
And here is a *cheer* to everyone that is continuing the NaNo journey to the very end! No matter what you think or do, DON'T GIVE UP YET! There is still plenty of time to make it if you believe in yourself and just put your butt in that chair.
Coffee helps too. A lot.
You can do it, world!
EXCERPT
So again, please keep in mind that the decoration of my sentences is going down and my words might not be very pretty any more. Some sentences might be downright bad. But hey! December is like nano editing month, right? I'll be taking advantage of that.
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That should just about do it,” the man said. He reached into
his other pocket and pulled out a remote control. It was filled with switches
and levers. Jason started to have second thoughts about what was really going
on. The man flicked a switch and the devices on their chests buzzed and
clicked. “Now the data sensors are activated and we can start recording some
field data! The testing area is at the bottom of the stairs,” The man stepped
aside and waved toward the open door. “Enter when ready!”
“Good
luck down there!” Sun waved happily. Her confidence was still really creepy.
Jason looked at his sister, who gave him a nervous nod and
stared down into the stairwell. Without thinking he stretched out and clasped
her hand in his. She smiled, but didn’t look up at him. Jason used his other
hand to give Isaac a thumbs up. “See you on the other side!”
“I’ll
be watching you!” Isaac called after them, but his voice already sounded far
away. The passageway seemed ancient, but Jason could see multicolored wires tacked along
the walls under the handrails. It was a strange contrast that Jason was used
to. The energy humming from the wires filled the stairway with a familiar
hum.
A set of glass double doors greeted them
at the bottom of the stairs, the floors and walls shifting from gray stone to
shiny white metallic. A camera was position in the top corner and moved itself
into focus. A jovial robotic voice echoed through its audio system “Welcome to
Training Lab Number 3! Please watch your step as the doors in front of you will
open automatically.”
Shiri
squeezed his hand a little harder. “Let’s do this,” she said with more
confidence filing her voice.
“You’re
pretty cute when you’re trying to be brave.” His eyes went wide in disbelief. Why did I just say that?
“’Trying?’
I don’t have to try, this kind of bravery just comes to me naturally.” She
played along with the joke, even if there was a faint blush on her cheeks. The
whooshing sound of the open doors was a welcome change of an awkward moment.
The two of them released hands and walked
inside. The dark room quickly illuminated with hidden lights in the white tiled
ceiling. The room was empty except for a single glass table in the middle of
the room. Two petri dishes filled a single helping of gray goo sat waiting.
“The test is about to begin. Please take your designated amount of Element 219
from the table in front of you,” the overly happy announcer said.
Jason looked around and Shiri pointed at
the table. “I guess they mean this stuff?” she asked. “Can you just pick it up
or…?”
“Well
I don’t see any gloves or warning stickers,” Jason looked around and up at the
camera who waited silently. Focusing back on the gray goo, he shrugged his
shoulders. “Yeah I guess we just take it.”
“It
looks like a piece of clay,” his sister observed. She reached out and
picked of the goo. After a moment of sitting in her palm, the goo started to
move; it expanded almost like liquid, covering the inside of her hand and
reaching up her fingers. “Oh my god, it’s taking over my hand! Jason do
something!”
Jason reached over to do – he didn’t know
– but the substance didn’t respond to his touch. He picked up the petri dish
and used it like a shovel to pry the goo off her hand. Nothing worked. When
Shiri looked about to cry, a loud cracking sound echoed throughout the room
followed by a high pitch ringing.
Then it sounded like someone was clearing
their throat. “Hello, hello! Can my two volunteers hear me?” the voice of the
man rang out. “Tell the young lady not to be alarmed, it’s a totally natural
process. The metal will bond with the first person it touches in order to
absorb their DNA. Completely safe.”
“This
stuff is glued to her, how are we supposed to get it off?!” Jason cried in
distress.
“You
really worry too much young man. It’s simple! The process of imprinting at the
end of the experiment will detach the substance, whether you are successful or
not.”
Shiri sniffed back her tears and stood a
little taller. “I’m okay Jason. I just got a little scared. Go ahead and pick
up your piece.” Her curvy eyes lifted with a smile. “At least then we would
both be stuck like this.”
“How
reassuring to hear you say that,” Jason joked back. He picked up the blob and
it worked the same on his palm as well, coating the complete underside of his
hand. The robotic voice happily cracked back into the speaker. “Please proceed
to the back door and use the hand scanner to confirm successful contact.”
The audio cracked again and the voice of
the professor came back into the room. “Eh yeah I forgot to mention that this test
runs with an automatic tutorial system. I haven’t figured out how to disable it
yet, so just bear with the protocols okay?”
“How
can you forget something important like that?” Jason called out.
“Ha
ha, must of slipped my mind.”
“Right,”
Shiri sighed. She straightened up and smiled at her companion. “Let’s get out
of here. The sooner this test is over the better I’ll feel.”
Both of the them
walked to the back and saw a scanner with the shape of a handprint. Shiri
offered her hand on the pad first. It lit up with a grid-like light and ran
over the palm of her open hand. The robotic voice chimed in “Contact with
Element 217 confirmed! Next test subject please!” Jason offered his gray hand
in the same way and a green light flashed above the exit. “The test trials will
now begin. Good luck!” the friendly voice offered.
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OMG! Congrats on your word buffer!!!!
ReplyDeleteI see it go through the roof and it makes me panic a little AAAAAAHHHHH!!
Seriously, great job!! You're totally gonna win that shirt, I mean, that NaNo!! ^_^
Nooo! I wanna know what the test is about!
Nice excerpt! Tomorrow, I'll read back all the previous posts! :D
Keep up the good work! :D
I am so excited about my words as well, I'm so gonna win this XD
DeleteBut yeah, my book is only in the middle so I need to keep writing long after November I think. So far the test sounded exciting? Yay, that makes me feel great! It feels like my writing technique is falling so low, but I'm forcing myself to continue on. Your encouragement really helps!