Also - to take out passive voice whenever I come across it.
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| Shiri's Office - The location of chapter one |
It introduces one of the female main characters, Shiri, and describes a mysterious "accident" that she might have had something to do with. And since everyone knows about it, they are also whispering behind her back. What's a girl to do in summer, while trying to avoid contact with everyone else?
I think though...since I'm the MOST acquainted with the beginning of my story (I've reread and rewrote and rearranged it too many times)....I think when I stared editing tomorrow I'm gonna skip around a bit. Maybe even try expanding on the ending of the book.
Ya know, the part I rushed through just to call the stupid draft completed :P
Well that's enough for now. I want to keep editing time at a minimum every day, so I can keep my "new eyes" perspective as long as I can. Till next time, write on!
